Rain, My Love!

This post has been published by me as a part of Blog-a-Ton 55; the fifty-fifth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with ​Rashmi Kumar, the author of Hooked, Lined and Single and Jyoti Arora, the author of Lemon Girl. .


My Love, The Rain.

I was walkin’ along the road;
You were also coming with me on a chariot, I noticed!
I asked you not to come with me, the boredom would surround you.
But, your stubbornness has defeated me.
You know that I’m nothing without you;
You know that I won’t be able to endure without you.
You just came along with me for these silly reasons;
I’m so glad that I’ve someone who is so benevolent.

I was going to do a work, when you accompanied me.
I entered the pied-a-terre, got busy.
I’d warned you.
You’re so solicitous that you started pourin’ down!
I was overwhelmed;
I sat down and kept admirin’!
The work which was to be done, was kept undone.
I was hypnotised by your drizzlin’ attitude.
I was sittin’ beside the door while you were pourin’ for me.
I wanted to quaff you.
I thought it would to a sin if I take my eyes off from you;
And I kept lovin’ you!

The shower, touchin’ the ground, was unrollin’ the odour of the earthy whiff all around;
Forcin’ the livin’ souls to embrace you around.
Finally I jumped under you, and your engulfin’ drops touched my lips and I kissed it;
And said, “My love, the Rain!”
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Comments

  1. What a lovely poem, Subham. Every single line of the poem demonstrates your love for the rain. I really love the ending paragraph. After reading it, I felt the droplets kissing my cheeks. Keep up the great work, bro.

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    1. Thank you Yatin Bhaiya. I'm glad that you like the last para. And thank you for your unconditional support.

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  2. Subham, I can write lot of words to appreciate your thoughts which you have put in this poem, but I'll like to write a single word for it - 'Perfect'.

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    1. This really means a lot for me. Thank you for the appreciation. I'm glad that you like the poem.

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  3. Well Rain, At first when i read I thought you are describing about a girl who accompanied you in rain but subsequently the girl changed to rain that was dizzling. Nature is the best gift and you have greatly admired the love for rain....

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  4. Lovely poem Subham. We often complain when it rains. But the manner in which you described the rain is beautiful and I wish it rained now:)
    You're truly gifted my friend. Well done! Way to go:)

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    1. Thank you Ma'am. I'm glad that you like my poem.

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  5. Hi Subham,

    That was wonderful indeed :)

    As everyone, especially the Ahaian's, as I see them here, mentioned, one can make out your love for the rains. I think even your earlier post, the one with the video showed just that - and I am glad the rainy season is coming up soon now. Nicely written poem, especially the last few lines. Keep it up!

    Thanks for sharing. Have a nice week ahead, and I'd meet you here once I'm back from my blogging break now :)

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    1. I'm glad that you like my poem ma'am. And I'd be grateful if your join us soon.

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  6. This is an interesting poem. I was a bit confused at first on how you were using the metaphor of the rain but once the poem unfolded, I noticed your direction. I would rework the beginning perhaps to better reflect how you are using this metaphor of the rain and to avoid confusion. I enjoyed the ambiguity you develop between the rain and a person throughout the poem.

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    1. Thank you. I'm glad that you liked my work.

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  7. You know how to say a story in a beautiful way! Totally loved it! Keep writing for BAT!

    Someone is Special

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    1. Thank you. I'm happy that you like the poem.

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  8. Oh this is superb. I just wanna get drenched in the rains now. The last lines romantic .. Keep it up.

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    1. Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoy reading my poem.

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  9. Wow Subham,

    How you write such Memerising poems is astonising to me. An excellent write-up with cool feelings to your Love.
    Rain is always true gift of God, and you made it more beautiful and colorful.
    Loved it, and happy to share them

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    1. Thank you Justin. I just started writing poem. And I myself don't know. I just drafted or jotted down my feeling in phrases.

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  10. Such a lovely poem ^_^ . Whatever you do just don't stop writing :)

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    1. Thank you. And I'm glad that you like the poem. Keep encouraging me and definitely I'll be the 'best'. And I'm thinking to pursue writing as my profession.

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  11. lovely Subham :) Cheers, Archana - www.drishti.co

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  12. Hi

    What a great poem and this a wonderful masterpiece. Thanks for sharing. Thumbs up.

    Have a lovely week.

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    1. Thank you, Ikechi for appreciation. And, I'm glad you like the poem.

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  13. This is wonderful.
    Every line, every word, made me want to purge in the rain more.
    Also, I would appreciate your vocab.
    Keep it up. :D

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